My daughter's birthday
My daughter celebrated her birthday yesterday.
She turned fifteen years old. She received a new mobile phone as a present.
She went bowling with her friends. After that, our family drank tea and ate pizza, with a big sweet cake.
In the evening, we went to the cinema to see the new cartoon "Sing". This movie was made in 3D. The cartoon is very funny and interesting. We all liked it
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My daughter's birthday
My daughter celebrated her birthday yesterday.She turned fifteen years old. She received a new mobile phone as a present.
She went bowling with her friends. After that, our family drank tea and ate pizza, with a big sweet cake.
In the evening, we went to the cinema to see the new cartoon "Sing". This movie was made in 3D. The cartoon was very funny and interesting. We all liked it.
Pay attention to tenses, in this case everything should be in the past tense as the event happened in the past (yesterday).
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