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c Cloning ¿ - good or bad?
To begin with, I strongly oppose to the idea of cloning living animals or people. It is true that it could be a great asset and an advantage for further scientific investigation. Cloning animals would be an amazing help in the genetic field. Scientists might be finally able to recreate the image of the great ancient animal species. Parents would be able to replace their deceased children with genetical modified 'biological' robots provided with interconstructed (not sure what you mean by this word - is "transferred" better?) memories and thoughts, and gifted with artificial intelligence. Also, cloning human organs would diminish the waiting lists for organ transplants and other surgical interventions. Therefore, doctors would be able to cure more people at a faster rate.However, when I read about the true scope of this practice, it reminded me of the intellectual and philososphical movement named transhumanism, which defends the idea that we, people, should use the advanced technology within our reach with the aim of improving ourselves and both our mental and physical capacities.
In my view, transhumanism and cloning have more similar goals than one might think. In the first place, along with all the positive contributions, cloning would look forward not only to create a good and fucnnctional specimen, but a perfect one. However, the more they try to make something flawless, the less natural it becomes. As a consequence, our dreams are not limited to create a good matter, (I think you mean "something good"?)but to make feasible the idea of superpowers and other sci-fi things that shall will make us, humans, a more superior race. I see it as something unfair nonetheless, as only the people of high prestige of our society will get the chance to have implanted in them and in their children the desired traits (intelligence, strength, attractiveness), but the lower social classes will not have the same opportunity. This will create a large social gap in our society that had been was erased many decades ago, since the UDHR in 1948.
To be clear, I am not against saving people and animal species, but I do object the idea of the wrong person getting their hands on this well-aimed project, and ending up turning it into something unpleaseant.
Thank you very much for correncting this text and I hope you've enjoyed your reading! You're free to leave a comment. I'd like to know other people's opinion about this topic.
Muy bien y sobre una thema muy discutible. I agree with your stance. People with money will always be the first to be able to exploit new technological advancements e.g. tourist trips to the moon which have been in the news recently. However, the issue of transhumanism brings with it many more ethical questions which, I suspect, we will only deal with once faced with them...but will it be too late then?
Your english is superb and I suspect the corrections I have made were largely "typos" (simple errors made during typing). You are clearly very close to being a flawless english speaker. Is your spoken english as good? If you wish to practice in an intercambios with me please contact me - but don't expect my spanish to be anywhere near your amazing standard of english!
cloning ¿good or bad? - Cloning - Good or bad?
To begin with, I strongly oppose to the idea of cloning living animals or people. It is true that it could be a great asset and an advantage for further scientific investigation. Cloning animals would be an amazing help in the genetic field. Scientists might be finally able to recreate the image of the great ancient animal species. Parents would be able to replace their deceased children with genetical genetically modified 'biological' robots provided with interconstructed memories and thoughts, and gifted with artificial intelligence. Also, cloning human organs would diminish the waiting lists for organ transplants and other surgical interventions. Therefore, doctors would be able to cure more people at a faster rate.However, when I read about the true scope of this practice, it reminded me of the intellectual and philososphical movement named transhumanism, wichwhich defends the idea that we, people, should use the advanced technology within our reach with the aim of improving improving ourselves and both our mental and phisicalphysical capacities.
In my view, Transhumanism and cloning have more similar goals than one might think. In the first place, along with all the positive contributions, cloning would look forward not only to create a good and fucntionalfunctional specimen, but a perfect one. However, the more they try to make something flawless, the less natural it becomes. As a consequence, our dreams are not limited to create a good matter, but to make feasible the idea of superpowers and other sci-fi things that shall make us, humans, a more superior race. I see it as something unfair nonetheless, as only the people of high prestige of our society will get the chance to have implanted in them and in their children the desired traits (intelligence, strength, atractiveness), but the lower social classes will not have the same opportunity. This will create a large social gap in our society that had been erased many decades ago, since the UDHR in 1948.
To be clear, I am not against saving people and animal species, but I do object the idea of the wrong person getting their hands on this well-aimed project, and ending up turnigturning it into something unpleasentunpleasant.
Thank you very much for correnting this text and I hope you've enjoyed your reading! You'refree to leave a comment. I'd like to know other people's opinion about this topic.
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Hey there! That was an incredibly interesting, well written essay! I must admit, I definitely agree with you. Cloning provides science with wonderful opportunities but it most only be used to an extent to prevent it being abused. Specifically with increasing the gap between the rich and the poor, with the rich having access to such things and the poor do not, as you stated!
I just corrected a few spelling errors for you, which were nothing serious given the really good quality of your writing!
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