It is better to grow up with siblings than without. Do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, I believe it is better to grow up with siblings than without. I have a younger brother, who is one years younger than me. With siblings, we will have great company, and can have a positive stimulating to the developing of brain. By the way, siblings can share responsibility with each other.
First of all, siblings are best company in growing stage. Because I have a brother, I always share my happiness and sadness with him. When I shared my experience with my brother when I was young, I would know that I was not alone and felt the real connection with the world. If any bad or uncomfortable things happened in my school, I would let him know. My brother would discuss with me and give me some suggestions to let me get through the difficulties. We always accompany with each other. I cannot image growing up without him.
Second, with siblings will bring the great stimulating of brain. Scientist believe we need to stimulate children’s brain, and it will help them develop their intelligence. Parents can talk and play with their child absolutely, but they have their jobs and housework need to do. If a child have siblings, they can paly, talk, and learn with each other, it will bring the best reaction and stimulate children’s brain daily.
Finally, siblings can share responsibilities with each other. Since I was young, I share housework with my brother. After growing up, we share and discuss everything in my family. For example, we always take turns to go home to accompany with our parents. If we need to finish somethings in my family , we will do it cooperation. When we need to do some serious decision about my family, we can discuss in advance. An old saying goes well, “ Two heads are better than one”. If we have siblings, it will be easier to make decision correctly.
I have a brother that I grow up with happiness . How lucky I am! I totally agree it is better to grow up with siblings than without.
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It is better to grow up with siblings than without. Do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, I believe it is better to grow up with siblings than without. I have a younger brother, who is one years younger than me. With siblings, we will have great company, and can have a positive stimulatingstimulation to the developing of brain. By the way, siblings can share responsibility with each other.First of all, siblings are the best company in the growing stage. Because I have a brother, I always share my happiness and sadness with him. When I shared my experiences with my brother when I was young, I would know that I was not alone and feltfeel thea real connection with the world. If any bad or uncomfortable things happened in my school, I would let him know. (Could also say "at my school", "in my school" is more about the school, "at my school" is more about your experiences at school.) My brother would discuss with me and give me some suggestions to let help me get through the difficulties. We always accompany with each other. I cannot image imagine growing up without him.
Second, with siblings will bring the great stimulating stimulation of the brain. Scientists believe we need to stimulate children's brains, and it will help them develop their intelligence. (Scientists in general is more than one scientist and children plural have brains plural.) Parents can talk and play with their child of course absolutely, but they have their jobs and housework need to do. ("absolutely" isn't so bad, but it sounds more total, a sense of completeness, so "of course" sounds better here.) If a child have has siblings, they can palyplay, talk, and learn with each other, and it will bring the best reaction and stimulate children’s brains daily. (maybe you mean "bring the best results", "best reaction" sounds strange.)
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