Shenzhen is calling
As you know, Shenzhen has many fine harbors and waterfront Parks , you can go to beautiful beaches to swim. The weather is generally pleasant in Shenzhen, temperate and mild in the autumn; there is a bit of cool breeze in the winter, but it is just warm enough to do anything.
The Exhibition Center is located in central Shenzhen, a number of exhibitions was held in there regularly. Shenzhen boasts large shopping malls, including Coco Park, MixC, and Kingglory, which carry luxury retailers. For everyday purchases, people go to Dongmen and SEG Plaza.
Shenzhen has the world's ninth tallest building, the Shun Hing Square。It's also the tallest building in Shenzhen. There are many theme parks, like East OCT, Splendid China Folk Village, Window of the World, Happy Valley, where both adults and children like, and we can go there for fun.
Well, the 26th Universiade will be held in Shenzhen in August this year. Everyone is looking forward to this day.
The emblem of Shenzhen Universiade is U. Which consist of the red yellow blue green dark dots. The mascot is UU, it is a smile face that change from the emblem. Beside this , it represent Universiade, universe, union, you and so on.
Start Here, this sentence is simple, neat, concise and full of impact. It is the slogan of Shenzhen Universiade. It stands for the spirit of creativity . It also shows the respect to every religion, nation and culture around the world. This gives an expression of personality, diversity and passion of the teenage dream.
Shenzhen is calling are u ready to enjoy this fantastic great sports event????
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One good turn deserves another... :) Here is my 2 cents worth of correction. I assume this is a semi-formal introduction and an invitation to the world to your home country.
Shenzhen is calling!
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Shenzhen is calling
As you know, Shenzhen has many fine harbours and Waterfront Parks, you can aslo go to beautiful beaches and swim. The weather is generally pleasant in Shenzhen, temperate and mild in the autumn; and there is a bit of a cool breeze in the winter, but it is still warm enough to do anything.The Exhibition Center is located in central Shenzhen, a number of exhibitions are held in there regularly. Shenzhen boasts large shopping malls, including Coco Park, MixC, and Kingglory, which carry luxury retailers. For everyday purchases, people go to Dongmen and SEG Plaza.
Shenzhen has the world's ninth tallest building, the Shun Hing Square。It's also the tallest building in Shenzhen. There are many theme parks, like East OCT, Splendid China Folk Village, Window of the World, Happy Valley, where both adults and children alike can go there and have fun.
The 26th Universiade will be held in Shenzhen in August this year. Everyone is looking forward to this day.
The emblem of Shenzhen Universiade is U. Which consist of the red yellow blue green dark dots. The mascot is UU, it is a smile face that change from the emblem. Beside this , it represents Universiade, universe, union, you and so on.
Starting here, this sentence is simple, neat, concise and full of impact. It is the slogan of Shenzhen Universiade. It stands for the spirit of creativity . It also shows the respect of every religion, nation and culture around the world. This gives an expression of personality, diversity and passion of the teenage dream.
Shenzhen is calling are u ready to enjoy this fantastic great sport event????
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