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下雨了！！！ It's raininmg and thundering outside.The air is so cool and fresh.I'm listening to the rain but ignored the thunder.My feelings are very complex.I lose the contact with my dearest friend.I feel very down and depressed.:(

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下雨了！！！It's raining!!!

It's raininmg raining and thundering outside with thunder and lightning1.The air is so cool and fresh.  I'm listening to the rain but ignoreding the thunder.  My feelings are very complex. I loset the contact with my dearest friend.I'm feel very so down and depressed.:(

1.  Thundering is an adjective. eg. A thundering round of applause - they clapped their hands so loud that it sounded like thunder.

You need to be aware of spacing.  It is standard and a must to leave a single space after a punctuation mark.  The exception is a period (full stop) requiring 2 spaces.
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Don't worry :) I really like the rain and thunder :) I have very big room on attic, and big window-roof, from this moment I like rain and thunderstorms :) If you get out from house in galoshes and with colorful umbrella and with your favorite music that comes with headphones, you will be in very fantastic humor and you will be the happiest man in the world :) Believe me.. I myself often so I do :) People look at me weird, but after a while seeing my smile, they smile at me :) The awful weather need not be so depressing.. If someone next of you pass someone on the street smiling, what are you doing? - You are also smiling. Right? If you are smiling, everybody who are next to you at the moment are also smiling. :) This is my opinion :) Take care! Don't worry
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Don't worry :) I really like the rain and thunder :) I have very big room on attic, and big window-roof, from this moment I like rain and thunderstorms :) If you get out from house in galoshes and with colorful umbrella and with your favorite music that comes with headphones, you will be in very fantastic humor and you will be the happiest man in the world :) Believe me.. I myself often so I do :) People look at me weird, but after a while seeing my smile, they smile at me :) The awful weather need not be so depressing.. If someone next of you pass someone on the street smiling, what are you doing? - You are also smiling. Right? If you are smiling, everybody who are next to you at the moment are also smiling. :) This is my opinion :) Take care! Don't worry

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