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Did you know..? Acordind to greek mithology, originaly humans being were created with four arms, four legs and one head with two faces. Fearing their power, they were divided by Zeus in two being. And since then, they are condened to looking for their other half and only when it is achieve, they are completly happy. Myth of androgyn, Plato.

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According to Greek mythology, originally humans being were created with four arms, four legs and one head with two faces. Fearing their power, Zeus divided them they were divided by Zeus into two beings. And since then, they are have been condemned to looking for their other half and only when it is achieve found, are they are completely happy.

Myth of androgyn, Plato.


Comment: Very interesting, I didn't know about this myth. Most of the mistakes were simple spelling errors. The biggest mistake was a misplaced participial phrase "Fearing their power." Who fears their power? Zeus fears their power; therefore, "Zeus" must be the subject of the phrase (and also subject of the sentence). This kind of error is common among native English speakers when they write! But it's important to have a correct subject for the participial phrase.

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According to Greek mythology, originaly humans beings were originally created with four arms, four legs, and one head with two faces. Fearing their power, they were divided by Zeus into two beings. And Since then, they have been are condemned to looking for their other half.and only when it is Once this has been achieved, they are will be completely happy.

Myth of Androgyny: Plato.

Here you go, good sir.  As a fan of Greek mythos, I love the story.  Keep up the good work!

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