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Iván Barbagallo

TV documentary programmes about unusual hobbies Proposal on TV documentary programmes about unusual hobbies. There are plenty of uncommon hobbies that might attract lots of people if only they were aware of their existence. I believe that a documental programme about them will be a great chance not only to make this unknown hobbies more popular and to encourage people to open their minds, but also to create an impressive TV show that will appeal to wide audiences. In my opinion, the most attractive unusual hobbies are paragliding and scuba diving. Up in the sky To jump from an aircraft flying at 3000 feet above the ground might seem like something that only intrepid people who love heights and dangerous activities will do. However, a documentary programme about paragliding will proove it to be a riskless, perfecty safe activity that can be practiced by almost everyone from 18 to 65 years old. Besides it's a great chance to show the audience breathtaking landscapes and to make them feel how it is to be on the top of the world. Under the sea Scuba diving is both an exciting and relaxing activity, but for some reason it is not as popular as it could be. If a documentary programme was done about it, people could get a glimpse of the wonderful world that lies underneath the wavy surface of the sea. I believe it could be a successful TV programme as it will show the outstanding beauty of the bottom of the sea, something the audience will just adore. In my opinion, both programmes could be really appealing to almost every audience, as they will show stickingly beautiful images of parts of the world they don't usually get the chance to see. Nevertheless, if I had to choose one of them, I would definitely pick the programme about paragliding, as its images will give people such an adrenaline rush they will feel thrillingly excited and eager to continue watching.

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TV documentary programmes about unusual hobbies

Proposal on TV documentary programs about unusual hobbies.

There are plenty of uncommon hobbies that might attract lots of people if only they were aware of their existence. I believe that a documentary programs about them will would be a great chance not only to make this these unknown hobbies more popular and to encourage people to open their minds, but also to create an impressive TV show that will would appeal to wide audiences. In my opinion, the most attractive unusual hobbies are paragliding and scuba diving.

- I put in documentary because it includes your point of a program about it. I changed will to would because its in the hypothetical or conditional.

Up in the sky
To jump from an aircraft flying at 3000 feet above the ground might seem like something that only intrepid people who love heights and dangerous activities will would do. However, a documentary programme about paragliding will proove it to be a riskless, perfecty safe activity that can be practiced by almost everyone from 18 to 65 years old. Besides it's a great chance to show the audience breathtaking landscapes and to make them feel how it is to be on the top of the world.

- i took out program because, to me, its sort of assumed at that point and its a little bit awk. prove is only mispelled.
Under the sea

Scuba diving is both an exciting and relaxing activity, but for some reason it is not as popular as it could be. If a documentary programme was done about it, people could get a glimpse of the wonderful world that lies underneath the wavy surface of the sea. I believe it could be a successful TV program as it would show the outstanding beauty of the bottom of the sea, something the audience will just adore.

In my opinion, both programs could be really appealing to almost every audience, as they will would show stickingly beautiful images of parts of the world they don't usually get the chance to see. Nevertheless, if I had to choose one of them, I would definitely pick the program about paragliding, as its images would give people such an adrenaline rush they would feel thrillingly excited and eager to continue watching.

- I'm not sure what you mean exactly by stickingly beautiful. Like the beauty will stick with them? or i think you mean strikingly beautiful, but stickingly isn't technically wrong.

-i would say: ...they would be thrilled and eager to continue watching. Because thrillingly seems redundant right next to excited and it's slightly awkward.

This is very well written; you did a great job on this. I'd be totally stoked to watch documentaries on any of these. The best part of life is exploring and finding new experiences. I agree with paragliding, and i'd definitely watch a documentary on rock climbing. Thank you for letting me read this.

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