Nervous
They was in their house when they listened a noise outside of their house and they got very nervous, then they run upstairs to bedroom and they cover with their blanket and never left of their room.
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Nervous
They was were (tema de concordancia verbal) in their house when they listened heard (Se usa "listen" cuando está intencional.) a noise outside of their house (<-- No es necesario porque ya escribiste "in their house.") and they got very nervous. Then they ran (pasado) upstairs to the bedroom, and they (Sólo se necesita un "and" antes de la cosa última en una lista.) covered themselves with their blanket, and never left of their room.
Aquí está, Felipe. Ojalá que estas correcciones te ayuden =)
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Nervous
They was in their house when they listened a noise outside of their house and they got very nervous, then they run upstairs to bedroom and they cover with their blanket and never left of their room.They WERE in their house when they HEARD a noise outside. They got very nervous SO THEY RAN upstairs to the bedroom, COVERED UP with their blanket, and never left their room.
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