Winter vacation

Hi Chloe, 

Thank you for sharing your experience in New Zealand. Do keep writing. Just to share, we "talk" to someone we are facing or having a conversation with someone. But we speak or say something to a general audience. There is a slight difference. 

Cheers, Lance 

Winter vacation

I stayed in New Zealand during this whole entire winter vacation. This is an amazing place! Everything is awesome here! I didn't visit many places because my brother needed to go to school, and also my mom also had to work. And (<--句子第一个词最好不要用连词。) Additionally, I found out that my English is bad, especially in talking when speaking. When I wanna (<-- "Wanna" 不是一个词。) wanted to talk say something, so many notions emotions popped up in my brain, but I speak nothing out couldn't say anything. That was a travesty.

你好 Chloe！还好你在新西兰玩得开心，对不对？别担心说不出英语，用外语开口说话总会有困难的。

你写得很好。请注意：英文动词有不同的时态。你的动词大部分都用的是现在时态，而你写的基本上都是已经发生的事，所以应该用过去时态。

有问题请别怕问。继续加油学习！