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Saying goodbye My good friend left here this morning. This is kind of a downside of traveling that you always have partings. (Well, people experience lots of partings in their lives though.) But you cannot always meet great people or get along with everyone. You would not feel lonely or sad if the person is not important for you. So, I should be happy to have those people in my life and look forward to meeting them in the future somewhere in the world. This is pretty exciting.(Yet, I still feel a bit empty.) Since I started to travel, the world seems to be small. Traveling to Europe used to be such a big deal to me but now it is not. I am looking forward to meet my friends I met during my travel again!!

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Saying goodbye

My good friend left here this morning. This is kind of a downside of traveling: that you (Avoid using the royal "you" when writing.) eventually, there will always have be partings (Well, even though people experience lots of partings in their lives though.) But you cannot However, it is not always possible to meet great people or get along with everyone. You It would not be possible to feel lonely or sad if the person is not someone important for you; So thus, I should be happy to have those people in my life and look forward to meeting seeing them again in the future somewhere in the world. This is pretty exciting, yet I still feel a bit empty.

Since I started to travel, the world seems to be has become small. Traveling to Europe used to be such a big deal to me, but now it is not. I am looking forward to meet seeing my friends I met (You don't need to say "I met" here because, if they're your friends, you must have already met them in some way.) during my travels again!!

Nicely written Madoca! I hope my corrections are helpful. Please feel free to ask me any questions you may have =)

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