My uncle In a nutshell , my maternal uncle Pavel always loved life and tried to develop himself. He was a workaholic and because of that had his well-being. Pavel’s wife was a lazy pessimist. She a

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KATERINA

My uncle In a nutshell , my maternal uncle Pavel always loved life and tried to develop himself. He was a workaholic and because of that had his well-being. Pavel’s wife was a lazy pessimist. She and Pavel were like chalk and cheese. However,she was an apple of Pavel’s eye. Unfortunately ,his wife wasn’t a long-longer.She wasn’t of an old age.She passed away suddenly in 2008.Pavel outlived her.When my uncle buried his wife at the local cemetery, he became more reserved. Pavel started despising youth and considering people of the same age as terrible bore .His way of live turned to inactive. However it сhanged with the appearance of a puppy!It did his good!Really! He was revived.

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My uncle

In a nutshell, my maternal uncle Pavel always loved life and tried to develop himself. He was a workaholic, and because of that, had his well-being. (This might not be the word you're looking for. Are you trying to say that, because he worked hard, he earned everything he received?)

Pavel’s wife was a lazy pessimist. She and Pavel were like chalk and cheese. (Is this a Russian analogy? Because in English...at least American English...it makes no sense. You could say they were like "night and day.") However, she was an the apple of Pavel’s eye.
Unfortunately, his wife wasn’t a long-longer did not live long. She wasn’t of an never reached old age. She passed away suddenly in 2008. Pavel outlived her. When my uncle buried his wife at the local cemetery, he became more reserved. Pavel started despising youth and considering people of the same age as terrible bore. His way of living turned to inactivity. However it сhanged back with the appearance of when he received a puppy! It really did his him good well!Really! He was has since been revived.

Nicely written Katerina. I hope my corrections are helpful. Please feel free to leave me any questions and/or comments =)

My uncle

In a nutshell , my maternal uncle Pavel always loved life and tried to develop himself. He was a workaholic and because of that had his well-being.
Pavel’s wife was a lazy pessimist. She and Pavel were like chalk and cheese. However, she was the apple of his eye.
Unfortunately ,his wife wasn’t a (long-longer?). At an early age, she passed away suddenly in 2008. Pavel outlived her. When my uncle buried his wife at the local cemetery, he became more reserved. Pavel started despising youth and considering people of the same age as terrible bores .His way of live turned to inactive. However it сhanged with the appearance of a puppy! This did him some good! Really! He was revived.

Very well written!

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