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My dad and mom had a cold war at the daylight, they were indifferent to each other and even no communication, which made me extremely awkward. While I rack my brain to find out how to easy their tense relationship, they just started to have talks.
Thank God :)
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My dad and mom had a cold war at the daylight we're giving each other the cold shoulder, they were indifferent to each other and were even not communicating, which made me feel extremely awkward. While I was racking my brain to find out how to ease the tension, in their relationship, they just started to improve and they began to have talk to each other.Thank God :)
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My dad and mom had a brief “cold war” in the daytime recently, they were indifferent toward each other and not even talking, both of which left me feeling extremely awkward around them. While I anxiously racked my brain trying to figure out a way to "break the ice" in order to ease their tense relationship, before I could do so, they just gradually started talking again. Thank God! :)
Hi Wee. Good job! Nothing much to correct, but I
did modify your text to make it sound more natural to my native ears. As to
your parents, they were mad at each other, not with you, so rather than trying
to get them to talk to each other, just talk to each of them separately. That
usually serves to bring them out of their “shells” and they might then perhaps
have spoken to each other sooner. I hope that his helps you. Keep writing and keep
posting. J.
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