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Share a happy thing My mom just told me,my brother got the japan visa.Im so exciteing that he can come to japan visit me.Now im thinking where i should take him to go.Disney Land? or Skytree? I guess he will love Disney Land. And he love sushi,so am i. Also can take my partents to visit my university. I look forward to them arrival.

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Sharing a happy thing story

My mom just told me my brother got the his Japan visa. I'm so excited that he can come to Japan to visit me. Now I'm thinking about where I should take him to go visit. Disneyland? or Skytree? I guess he will love Disneyland. And He also loves sushi, and so am do I.

Also, I can take my parents to visit my university.
I look forward to them their arrival.

That's wonderful news, Fay! I hope you have a great time with them! I also hope my corrections are helpful. Please let me know if you have any questions =)

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Share a happy thing

My mom just told me that my brother got a visa for Japan. I'm so excited that he can go to Japan and visit me. Now I'm thinking where i should take him to go. Disney Land or Skytree? I guess he will love Disney Land. And he loves sushi, as do I.
Also can take my parents to visit my university.
I look forward to their arrival.

Very well written!

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