Visit Medellín

(1) - no te equivocas, pero lo mejor es sin "me"    /// "amazing sensations" bastante raro aqui

First of all, I walked around the streets and I could see the huge village (2) square of the village. The Hernán Cortés statue is there. It’s enormous and you can see a stone in the same place where Hernán Cortés’ house was. As you know Hernán Cortés was a conqueror of America.

(2) village square---siempre decimos "village square", nunca "square of the village".  A veces en ingles podemos usar "of" como usas "de" pero aqui, no, siempre village square

When you climb the hill of the castle/hill where the castle is/hill that the castle is on, you find a fascinating Roman theatre (on it). It’s an impressive monument/edifice/building, where performances are played nowadays. It’s absolutely fantastic. You’ll love it.

no creo que "monument" sea la major palabra aqui, pero depende de lo que trata el edificio

Finally, I climbed up to the castle. Its great walls of stone are really high. The views of the landscape from the castle are absolutely incredible.

Although I finished my visit absolutely exhausted, Medellín is a place which is well worth to visiting.

I hope that this letter encourages you to visit Medellín and you want to share (with me) your impressions  with me (mas fluidez).

Yours,
Fernando