My dachshund dog, Pancho
My little pet named Pancho, it's so cute. It has a lot of energy, when I arrive at home Pancho always spring around me. Pancho's gestures are beautiful, so I'm falling in love with him and I can't stop kissing him. Pancho is like a 'hot dog', because his family have particulary characteristic, the body is long but not tall, his paws are short and I think he has a mysterious thing inside because He can jump a lot. I don't have children and I feel Pancho is my son, I think a pet is a responsibility because it need cares and if you are ready you could take the challenge.
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My dachshund dog, Pancho
My little pet dog named Pancho, it's is so cute. It He has a lot of energy. When I arrive at home, Pancho always springs around up at me. (Are you trying to say he jumps up at you or he runs around you?) Pancho's gestures are beautiful, so I'm falling in love with him and I can't stop kissing him. Pancho is like a "hot dog," (In English, commas and periods are always inside quotation marks.) because his family have has particulary characteristics: the his body is long but not tall, his paws are short, and I think he has a mysterious thing part (Avoid using the word "thing" wherever you can because it sounds very childish.) inside because he can jump a lot. I don't have children and so I feel like Pancho is my son. I think a pet is a responsibility because it need cares, and if you are ready you could take on the challenge of owning one.¡Muy bien Gasdaly! Ojalá que mis correcciones y notas sean útiles =)
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My dachshund dog, Pancho
My little pet named Pancho is so cute. He (the pronoun he/she is generally used to talk about our pets in English) has a lot of energy. When I arrive at (no need for the preposition "at" here) home Pancho always jumping around me. Pancho's gestures are beautiful, so I'm falling in love with him and I can't stop kissing him. Pancho is like a 'hot dog', because his family have a particular characteristic about them - their body is long but not tall, his paws are short and I think he has some mysterious thing/ability/power inside because he can jump a lot. I don't have children and I feel like Pancho is my son, I think a pet is a great/big responsibility because it needs/requires care and if you are ready you could take on the challenge.Want to progress faster?
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