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Please help me to correct this I have made an introduction about myself here on italki but I am not sure whether there are any mistakes in the sentences. Therefore, I would love if anyone can help me to correct them and if it is possible, could you improve it in a native English way. Thank You! Here is the introduction: My name is Linda. I love travelling, watching Youtube and reading books. Besides, I love writing daily blogs. Especially, writing blogs in English but my English is just at an intermediate level. Sometimes, it is hard for me to express my thoughts and make complex sentences due to lack of grammars and vocabularies. Therefore, I would love everyone help me with the writing and in return, I can help you with Vietnamese as well as Chinese language. Thank you :)

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Please help me to correct this

I have made an introduction about myself here on italki but I am not sure whether there are any mistakes in the sentences. Therefore So, I would love it if anyone can could help me to correct them and if it is possible, could you improve it in a native English way. Thank you!
Here is the introduction: My name is Linda. I love travelling, watching Youtube and reading books. Besides this, I love writing daily blogs, especially writing blogs in English, but my English right now is just at an intermediate level. Sometimes, it is hard for me to express my thoughts and make complex sentences due to lack of grammars and vocabulary. Therefore, So I would love it if everyone helped me with the my writing and in return I can help you with Vietnamese as well as Chinese language. Thank you :)

Your English is very good! Keep up the good work :)

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Please help me to correct this

I wrote an introduction about myself here on italki but I am not sure whether there are any mistakes in the sentences. Therefore, I would love it if anyone can help me to correct them and, if it is possible, could you improve it so that it flows in a native English way. Thank you!
Here is the introduction: My name is Linda. I love travelling, watching Youtube, and reading books. Besides that [or "Apart from that"], I love writing daily blogs. I particularly like writing blogs in English, but my English is only at an intermediate level. Sometimes, it is hard for me to express my thoughts and make complex sentences because my grasp of grammar and vocabulary isn't that deep. Therefore, I would love anyone to help me with my writing. In return, I can help you with Vietnamese and/or Chinese language. Thank you! :)
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Please help me to correct this

I have written an introduction about myself here on italki but I am not sure whether or not there are any mistakes in the sentences. Therefore, I would love it if someone could help me correct them and if possible, improve it in a natural way. Thank You!
Here is the introduction: My name is Linda. I love traveling, watching Youtube and reading books. I also love writing daily blogs, especially blogs in English even though my English is only intermediate level. Sometimes it is hard for me to express my thoughts and make complex sentences due to my lack of grammar and vocabulary. Therefore, I would love it if anyone could help me with the writing and in return, I could help them with Vietnamese or Chinese. Thank you :)
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Please help me to correct this

I have made written an introduction about myself here on italki but I am not sure whether there are many mistakes in the sentences. Therefore, I would love if anyone can would help me to correct them, and if it is possible, could you they improve it in a native English way (make it sound native). Thank You!
Here is the introduction: My name is Linda. Besides, writing daily blogs, I love travelling, watching Youtube, and reading books. Besides, I love writing daily blogs. Especially, Writing blogs in English is a challenge for me because I think my English is just at an intermediate level. Sometimes, it is hard for me to express my thoughts clearly and make write complex sentences due to a lack of understanding of English grammar and insufficient vocabulary. Therefore, I would love for everyone the right people to help me with the my writing and in return, I can will help you them with Vietnamese as well as or Chinese language, whichever they prefer. Thank you :)


PS: YOU ARE NOT AT AN INTERMEDIATE LEVEL. Maybe a very high intermediate, or low advanced.

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I wanted to change the verb "can help" to "will help". Because we all can guess that you can help, but the question is, will you do it?

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