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an old fashioned working style
This morning, I saw two persons people* talking while waiting a train. They looked like** a boss and a subordinate and were talking about training systems of for new employees. The Boss said to the subordinate, maybe he was also a new employee, "I don't think they don't need to have their own computers during their training phase." The Subordinate was very much surprised. "Really? Why do you think so?" Then, the Boss said "Because we've have only had one word-prosessor processor a group*** when since we entered**** started the company. It's became become too much too convenient for new employees recently." "But....now, if we want to know something, we can search on the internet quickly....", said Subordinate. Boss prevented him from continuing and said strongly sharply,***** "That's is! That makes you bad, definitely! Whenever you want to know something, you can find a lot of helpful books!"I, was sitting next to them, felt really awful. Word-proscessor??? What century are you talking about was this guy in??? Time has changed obviously. Because of this kind of quite old fashioned bosses leadership, working styles in Japan can't progress rapidly. Unless every managers may allow change, Japan will not being better improve. I really felt sorry about that subordinate. What do you think or how about your country?
Good story!
* "People" - The plural for "person" is "people." The history of these words is long and confusing. There are rare times when "persons" is used, and we also use "peoples" when talking about nationalities or ethnic groups. But 99.9% of the time, think "one person, two people."
** "They looked like" - you can also say "they appeared to be . . ."
*** I don't understand this phrase. Do you mean, "we have only had one word-processor for the entire team?"
**** Entered or started. "Enter" usually means to physically walk into a building. But for starting a new company, we say "since we founded" or "since we started" or "since we established . . ." To talk about when a person begins working at a company, we say "since I started at" or "since I began working at . . ."
***** "sharply" means that the boss spoke in a sudden, angry tone.
An old fashioned working style
This morning I saw two persons talking while waiting on/for a train. They looked like a boss and a subordinate and they were talking about training systems for new employees. The boss said to the subordinate, possibly a new employee, "I think they don't need to have their own computer during their training phase." The subordinate was very much surprised. "Really? Why do you think so?" Then, the boss said "Because we had only one word-processor per group when we joined the company. It became much too convenient for new employees recently." "But....now, if we want to know something, we can search on the internet quickly....", said the subordinate. The boss prevented him from continuing and said strongly "That is enough! That makes you bad, definitely! Whenever you want to know something, you can find a lot of helpful books!"I was next to them and felt really awful. 'Word-processor'??? What century are you talking about??? Time has changed obviously. Because of this kind of quite old fashioned boss, working styles in Japan cannot progress rapidly. Unless every manager can change, Japan will not improve. I was really sorry for that subordinate. What do you think or how about your country?
Very well written! I like italki's word-processor but I never use its highlights for my corrections.
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