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Wine: My New Hobby Learning about wine's world is my new hobby. Until one year ago, I didn't mind about wine. I have been interested in this subject since I traveled to Mendoza, in Argentina, last year. During my trip to the wineries in Mendoza, I learned basic things about wine. There, I had some opportunities to make tasting tours. I started to have much respect for everything that surrounds this world. Today, I started a book that intends to be a guide of wine for beginners. Until now, I learned that a regular bottle of wine supplies five glasses of 150 mililiters each. According my book, the characteristics of wine are: sweetness, acidity, tannins, alcohol and body. I will keep me apply in tasting! ;-)

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Wine: My New Hobby

Learning about wines around the world is my new hobby. Until one year ago, I didn't mind about wine/I didn't pay attention to wine/I wasn't interested in wine. I have been interested in this subject since I traveled to Mendoza, in Argentina, last year.

During my trip to the wineries in Mendoza, I learned basic things about wine. There, I had some opportunities to make do some wine-tasting tours. I started to have much/a lot of respect for everything that surrounds this world.

Today, I started a book that intends to be a guide of wine for beginners of wine (this word order is a bit more natural). Until now, I learned that a regular bottle of wine supplies five glasses of 150 mililiters each.

According to my book, the characteristics of wine are: sweetness, acidity, tannins, alcohol and body.

I will keep me apply in tasting! ;-) (OR, "I will continue tasting".)

Good writing practice Luciana. There are a number of things you do well in English. Keep practicing like you are, pay attention to teachers' recommendations and you'll keep improving. Let me know if you have questions or doubts about my corrections. - Jason

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