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Merry Christmas! Merry Christmas to you! Christmas is an important day all over the world. It is the same in china. But you must not imagine that I had never heard Christmas when I was a little girl. I grew up in a little village westnorth china. Nowadays every kids love Christmas because they receive presents this day. My daughter is one of them. This Christmas I cut some small branches of pine in the garden of our neighborhood. We made a Christmas garlands together. And we decorated it with pineals. We had a lot fun. We got a Christmas tree which was cut by gardeners in winter. Actually it is a branch without leaves. My daughter loves this Christmas tree and has decorated it. It is free and nice. Now she is sleeping soundly and the present is just under her tree. This is my home style Christmas in China. How about yours?

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Merry Christmas!

Merry Christmas to you!
Christmas is an important day all over the world. It is the same in china. But You must not imagine that I had never heard of Christmas when I was a little girl. I grew up in a little village in westnorth  northwest china. Nowadays every all kids love Christmas because they receive presents on this day. My daughter is one of them. This Christmas I cut some small branches of pine in the garden of our neighborhood. We made a Christmas garlands together, and we dedicated decorated it with pineals. We had a lot fun. My.   I  got a Christmas tree which was cut by gardeners in winter. Actually it is a branch without leaves. My daughter loves this Christmas tree and has dedicated  decorated it. It is free and nice. Now she is sleeping soundly and the her present is just under her the tree. This is my home style Christmas in China.
How about your Christmas?

Merry Christmas to you.  The piece is well written and I have just made a few changes.  Hopefully you can see where I have struck through a word then put a replacement in bold to the right hand side of it.


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Merry Christmas!

Merry Christmas to you!
Christmas is an important day all over the world. It is the same in China (really???). But You must not imagine that I had never heard of Christmas when I was a little girl. I grew up in a little village in the northwest of China. Nowadays every kids child loves Christmas because they receive presents this day, and my daughter is one of them. This Christmas I cut some small branches of pine in the a neighborhood garden of our neighborhood. We made a Christmas garlands together. And we decorated it them with pinecones(?) pineals. We had a lot fun. We got a Christmas tree which was cut by gardeners in winter. Actually it is a branch without leaves/needles. My daughter loves this Christmas tree and has decorated it. It is free and nice. Now she is sleeping soundly and the present is just under her tree. This is my home style Christmas in China.
How about yours?

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