Diary-103 (The Republic of Molossia)
The Republic of Molossia is located in a desert area of Nevada, it has a population of 12, the territory of the country is 0.005 sq.km. It's established in 1970, it just had a population of 4. It also has its own government website. The name "Molossia" drives from Spanish, it means "A little rocky hill". Molossia's money is Valora that looks like chip in a gambling establishmen.
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Diary-103 (The Republic of Molossia)
The Republic of Molossia, located in a desert area of Nevada, has a population of 12. The territory of the country is 0.005 sq.km. It was established in 1970. Then, it had a population of 4. It also has its own government website. The name "Molossia" is derived from Spanish and it means "A little rocky hill". Molossia's money is Valora which looks like chip in a gambling establishment."is derived" = comes from or originates from
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