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Describing a film How I said in my last notebook, I recently have watched the new Disney film 'Moana' and I will describe it here. (alert! it contain spoiler) Long time ago, the goddess 'Te Fiti' created life and raise island with the power of her stone. Attracted for the power, some warriors wanted to steal it and one of them got it, the demigod Maui. He stole the stone and the shadow became free, destrying slowly each island of the ocean. The main character Moana is a girl who is living in one of that islands. She love the ocean but her parents don't allow her to surf it. Her grandmother help her to find an answer for his problem and she find out that her ancestors were voyagers and the ocean choosen her for to realize a great mission: She must find and obligate to Maui to return the stone back. With some luck and the help of the ocean, she find Maui and both live adventures (They fight against coconuts, they search the Maui's weapon, etc). Finally, they arrive to the island where the stone was stolen. A great volcanic boss defend it and they must cooperate for to defeit it. While Maui fight against the boss, Moana enter inside the island and she find out that the volcanic boss is Te Fiti, who became in the boss when the stone was stolen. Moana return back the stone to Te Fiti and she became a goddness again, killing the shadows and healing the damaged islands.

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Describing a film

How I  As I've said in my last notebook, I recently have watched the new Disney film 'Moana' and I will describe it here. (alert! it contains spoilers)

A Long time ago, the goddess 'Te Fiti' created life and raised an island with the power of her stone. Attracted for the by the power, some warriors wanted to steal it and one of them got it, the demigod Maui. He stole the stone and the shadow became free, destroying slowly each island each island slowly of the ocean.
The main character, Moana, is a girl who is living lives on one of that those islands. She loves the ocean, but her parents don't allow her to surf it. Her grandmother helps her to find an answer for this problem and she finds out that her ancestors were once voyagers and the ocean had chosen her for to realize a great mission: that She must find and obligate to Maui to return the stone back.
With some luck and the help of the ocean, she finds Maui and they both  have an adventures (They fight against coconuts, they search the Maui's weapon, etc).
Finally, they arrive to the island where the stone was stolen. A great volcanic boss defends it and they must cooperate for to defeit it in order to defeat it. While Maui fights against the boss, Moana enters inside the island and she finds out that the volcanic boss is Te Fiti, who became in the boss when the stone was stolen. Moana returns back the stone to Te Fiti and she becomes a goddess again, killing the shadows and healing the damaged islands in the process.
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Describing a film

How I said in my last notebook, I recently have watched the new Disney film 'Moana' and I will describe it here. (alert! it contain spoiler)
> As I have mentioned  before in my last entry here, I have recently watched the new Disney movie "Moana", and I will describe it here . Alert! The following contains spoilers.
A long time ago, the goddess 'Te Fiti' created life and raised islands out of the sea with the power of her magic stone. Attracted to for the its power, some warriors wanted to steal it;  and one of them did just that : the demigod Maui /got it, the demigod Maui. He stole the stone, and the a dark shadow was cast far and wide, became free  slowly destroying slowly every each island in of the ocean.
The main character, Moana, is a girl who is living in one of the islands. She loves the ocean, but her parents don't allow her to surf in it. Her grandmother helps her to find an answer for to her his problem. and Later, she finds out that her ancestors were voyagers, and the ocean has chosen her for to realize a great mission: she must find and obliterate obligate to Maui and to return the stone back to its owner.
With some luck and the help of from the ocean, she finally finds Maui, and the real adventure begins for both of them.  both live adventures From the onwards, they have to fight against coconuts; they have to search for Maui's weapon, etc.
Finally, they arrive to at the island where the stone is kept /was stolen. A great powerful volcano boss is guarding defend it, and they ( who are the "they" ?? )must cooperate in order to defeat this boss .for to defeit it. While When Maui is fighting with  against the boss, (which boss? )Moana enters into inside the island hideout and she find out that the volcanic boss is actually Te Fiti, who became in the boss when the stone was stolen. Moana return back the stone back to Te Fiti,  and she became a goddness again, after which she kills the shadowy power  and heal the damaged islands .killing the shadows and healing the damaged islands.

I have not seen the movie, so I just follow it the best I can. But I am very confused by the last paragraph, though.

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