RELATIONSHIP FAMILIES
(1) Meal together.
I personally think that families should have a meal everyday because a meal with your familiy must be one of the most important thing in the relationship with them. Nowdays, I know a lot of people who can't speak with your parents or your children and that's the start point for several problems, for instance bad modals and habits, worst education...etc. Because of, in my opinion, sitting arounda table is an opportunity for speakin about several subjects and finally people are hapiest with their relatives.
(2) Leaving house.
In other hand, for my point of view, children should leave home when they can afford to because is very important for tweinties people begin a new form of live whitout their parents. In any case, this stage of life must be graduate, for instance in childhood go to a camp can be a good idea because they can practice good modals. Perhaps when you start univerty studies is the best point for independance whith your parents, althoug it's possible that you need money for survie because I don't still work. Money is the most important reason because young children cann't afford leave house's parents. If you have to be an adult, you need leave home quickly.
(3) Charge money parents.
I've thought about before, that is a logical question but I you live at home with your parents and you have a job, I think you must pay for meal and accomodation. If not possible, but I know a lot young people who work and they spend money on several hobbies, even they borrow a lot money from parents for then and they don't give money to parents. Living at home costs money and if you can't afford live alone, in my opinion I must give money to parents.
(4) Networking sides.
From my point of view, parents shouldn't be friend with their children on socail networking sides becausechildren can know informationabout their parents that don't need to know. In other hand parents should have a control about social networking sides that children have because it's necessary to know that relationship have your children. It's a way for preventing problems in their adolescent time. Internet is amazing and sociable side for knowledge but also it can be an insecure side.
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RELATIONSHIP FAMILIES
(1) Meal together.I personally think that families should have a meal everyday because a meal with your familiy must be one of the most important thing in the relationship with them. Nowdays, I know a lot of people who can't speak with your parents or your children and that's the start point for several problems, for instance bad modals and habits, worst education...etc. Because of, in my opinion, sitting arounda table is an opportunity for speakin about several subjects and finally people are hapiest with their relatives.
(2) Leaving house.
In other hand, for my point of view, children should leave home when they can afford to because is very important for tweinties people begin a new form of live whitout their parents. In any case, this stage of life must be graduate, for instance in childhood go to a camp can be a good idea because they can practice good modals. Perhaps when you start univerty studies is the best point for independance whith your parents, althoug it's possible that you need money for survie because I don't still work. Money is the most important reason because young children cann't afford leave house's parents. If you have to be an adult, you need leave home quickly.
(3) Charge money parents.
I've thought about before, that is a logical question but I you live at home with your parents and you have a job, I think you must pay for meal and accomodation. If not possible, but I know a lot young people who work and they spend money on several hobbies, even they borrow a lot money from parents for then and they don't give money to parents. Living at home costs money and if you can't afford live alone, in my opinion I must give money to parents.
(4) Networking sides.
From my point of view, parents shouldn't be friend with their children on socail networking sides becausechildren can know informationabout their parents that don't need to know. In other hand parents should have a control about social networking sides that children have because it's necessary to know that relationship have your children. It's a way for preventing problems in their adolescent time. Internet is amazing and sociable side for knowledge but also it can be an insecure side.
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Family Relationships
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On the other hand is correct not in the other hand.
Also on the other hand has some synonyms such as: Then, besides, further, on the contrary, furthermore, moreover.
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RELATIONSHIPS in FAMILIES
(1) Meals together.I personally think that families should have a meal everyday because a meal with your familiy must be one of the most important thing in the relationship with them. Nowdays, I know a lot of people who can't speak with their parents or their children and that's the start point for several problems, for instance bad modals and habits, worst education...etc. Because of, in my opinion, sitting around a table is an opportunity for speaking about several subjects and finally people are hapier with their relatives.
(2) Leaving house.
On the other hand, in my point of view, children should leave home when they can afford to because it is very important for people in their twenties (twenty-year-olds) to begin a new form of live whitout their parents. In any case, this stage of life must be graduated, for instance, in childhood going to a camp can be a good idea because they can practice good modals. Perhaps when you start univercity studies it is the best point for independance from your parents, althoug it's possible that you need money for survive because you don't still work. Money is the most important reason because young people cannot afford leaving parents' house. If you have to be an adult, you need leave home quickly.
(3) Charge money parents.
I've thought about it before, that it is a logical question if you live at home with your parents and you have a job, I think you must pay for meal and accomodation. If it is not possible, but I know a lot of young people who work and they spend money on several hobbies, even they borrow a lot of money from parents though they don't give money to parents. Living at home costs money and if you can't afford living alone, in my opinion, you must give money to parents.
(4) Networking sides.
From my point of view, parents shouldn't be friends with their children on socail networking sides because children can know information about their parents that they don't need to know. On the other hand parents should have a control about social networking sides that children have because it's necessary to know that relationship have your children. It's a way of preventing problems in their adolescent time. Internet is an amazing and sociable side (source) for knowledge but also it can be an insecure side (place).
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