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The Dyatlov Pass incident I read the article about The Dyatlov Pass incident today. That Mysteries event has happened in the winter of 1959. The group of ski hikers had go in the mountins and disappeared. Their abandoned camp was founded after a few weeks. Their body were founded in 1.5 kilometers from the camp. Somebody of all were dressed only in their underwear and were wear in single shoe, or socks, or were bareless. They had freeze to death. Somebody of them had wounds like if they were “hit by a car” or if them “were very tight higged by somebody”. Footprints of other people or marks of straggle abcenced. To this day nobody knows what happened to them. Сегодня я читала статью о гибели туристической группы на горном перевале. Это произошло зимой 1959 года. Группа лыжников ушла в горный поход и пропала. Их брошенную палатку нашли через несколько недель. Тела туристов были найдены в 1,5 километров от палатки. Кто-то из них был без верхней одежды, кто-то был обут только в один ботинок, кто-то был в одних носках. Они замерзли до смерти. Некоторые из них имели телесные повреждения, как если бы они были сбиты автомобилем или если бы их кто-то очень-очень крепко обнял. Следы других людей или следы драки отсутствовали. По сей день никто не знает что там произошло.

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The Dyatlov Pass incident

Today, I read an article about The Dyatlov Pass incident. That mysterious event happened in the winter of 1959. The group of ski hikers had gone to the mountains and had disappeared. Their abandoned camp was found a few weeks later. Their bodies were found 1.5 kilometers from the camp. Some of them were dressed only in their underwear and were wearing a single shoe, socks, or were barefoot. They had frozen to death. Some of them looked as if they had been hit by a car or as if they were crushed by someone. There were no footprints of other people and the signs of a struggle were absent.
To this day nobody knows what happened to them.
Сегодня я читала статью о гибели туристической группы на горном перевале. Это произошло зимой 1959 года. Группа лыжников ушла в горный поход и пропала. Их брошенную палатку нашли через несколько недель. Тела туристов были найдены в 1,5 километров от палатки. Кто-то из них был без верхней одежды, кто-то был обут только в один ботинок, кто-то был в одних носках. Они замерзли до смерти. Некоторые из них имели телесные повреждения, как если бы они были сбиты автомобилем или если бы их кто-то очень-очень крепко обнял. Следы других людей или следы драки отсутствовали. По сей день никто не знает что там произошло.


-> Your comment on meteorquake's version seems to suggest you meant crushed not hugged.

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The Dyatlov Pass incident

I read an article about the Dyatlov Pass incident today. That mysterious event happened in the winter of 1959. A group of ski hikers had gone into the mountins and disappeared. Their abandoned camp was found after a few weeks. Their bodies were found 1.5 kilometers from the camp. Some of them were dressed only in their underwear and were wearing a single shoe, or socks, or were barefoot/naked. They had frozen to death. Some of them had wounds as if they had been “hit by a car” or "very tightly hugged by somebody”. Footprints of other people or signs of struggle were absent.
To this day nobody knows what happened to them.

* When you first encounter something use 'a', afterwards use 'the'; eg: I saw a dog; the dog was very fast.

* I had to guess the meaning for "hugged" - perhaps another word could have been meant.

It was enjoyable to read! Mystery is all around us - the most mysterious thing of all is Consciousness.

David

(Edinburgh)

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