Kittens (Could someone take a look at the text?)
A few days ago I found this cat and its kittens. They were abandoned and seemed bad fed, I picked up the cats putting them into a basket, but I was afraid to be injured by the cat. The first thing I did it was to use a little trick putting a little piece of meat inside the basket and then I waited to see what would happen, then Mom and sons came into the basket.
I carried them to my house, but I have other pets, 5 dogs. Dogs and cats do not get along, so I called to my neighbor who was happy to receive the new visitors. I took a photo, it is attached to the bottom of the page.
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Kittens (Could someone take a look at the text?)
A few days ago I found this cat and her kittens. They were abandoned and seemed to be poorly fed. I wanted to pick the cats up and put them into a basket, but I was afraid that I might be injured by the cat. So, the first thing that I did it was to use a little trick of putting a small piece of meat inside the basket, and then I waited to see what would happen. The mom and her kittens went into the basket.I took them to my house, but I have five dogs. Dogs and cats do not get along, so I called my neighbor, who was happy to receive the new visitors. I took a photo; it is attached to the bottom of the page.
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Kittens (Could someone take a look at the text?)
A few days ago, I found this cat and its kittens. They were abandoned and seemed badly fed. I picked up the cats by putting them into a basket, but I was afraid to be of being injured by the cat. The first thing I did it was to use {better: "employ"} a little trick, putting a little piece of meat inside the basket and then I waiting* to see what would happen. Then Mom and sons came into went in the basket.I carried them to my house, but I have other pets: five dogs.*** Dogs and cats do not get along****, so I called to my neighbor who was happy to receive the new visitors. I took a photo, and it is attached to the bottom of the page.
*We tend to say "employ a trick".
**It's either "put... and waited..." or "putting... and waiting..."
***Numbers up to ten are written out in English composition.
****This suggests that dogs and cats in general do not get along. If you mean that *your* dogs did not get along, then it should be "the dogs and cats did not get along".
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