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(1) We say "medical school" instead of "university"

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Hi! My name is Anastasia (Hi as a short for Hello if not followed by the noun being addressed is a complete sentence in itself. Hence you start introducing yourself in the next sentence). I'm a medical student from Russia and this year (you needn't write 'year' here as it is understood) is my last year in at medical university. Here in Russia, we are studying study for six years in at university and after that thereafter ('after that' is okay but 'thereafter' is an excellent choice, and excellent is better that okay)  we are going to go for "ordinatura"(residence in America) which is last lasts for 2-5 years. I want to be a psyhiatrist psychiatrist (an unfortunate spelling mistake) and I also  want also to know English very well (you already began with 'I want' so you needn't repeat that in the same sentence). I hope that you will help me=)

I've used red to strike out mistakes, green to replace them with rectifications and blue to add my comments. You might want to read about some common mistakes in preposition usage, as you've written 'in university' whereas in proper English, we say 'at' university' as also some tenses as well as you have used the present continuous tense in some places where the simple present form is applicable.

That was a fine effort and go on studying English. Watch BBC documentaries with subtitles and try to notice and remember sentence construction from there. Some of my friends found this tip of mine useful. Hope you do too. Cheers Молодец

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This is my correction.