A disappointing trip I'd like to talk about a trip of HONGKONG I took . It was the most terrible trip I've experienced. That happened 5 years ago. One day , my mother called me and asked me if I could

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A disappointing trip I'd like to talk about a trip of HONGKONG I took . It was the most terrible trip I've experienced. That happened 5 years ago. One day , my mother called me and asked me if I could accompany her to HK for holidays. Since I was at home seldomly ,I accepted. However,I wouldn't have thought that we would participate in a package trip with my mom's friends. At the beginning of the trip, we took a mid-night fight because of its low price. We had a tour guide who made full use of our day time.We did have no time to roam about by our own. I felt very exhausted because the schedule was so full.I only had 5 hours for sleep. For me ,the most unbearable thing was that the tour guide took us to some certain shopping malls every day ,persuading us purchase luxury products which were really unnecessary for us. It was a disappointing trip I've never forgeot. I won't involve a package trip for ever.

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A disappointing trip

I'd like to talk about a trip of I took to Hong Kong. It was the most terrible trip I've ever experienced. It was 5 years ago.

One day, my mother called me and asked me if I could accompany her to Hong Kong on holiday (or: for a holiday). Since I was rarely (or: seldom*) at home, I accepted. However, I hadn't anticipated that we would be going on a package holiday with my mom's friends.

The trip started with a midnight flight because of its low price. We had a tour guide who made full use of the day.We didn't have any time to roam about on our own.

I felt very exhausted because the schedule was so full. I only had 5 hours to sleep (better: I only got five hours' sleep).

For me, the most unbearable thing was that the tour guide took us to some certain shopping malls every day, persuading us purchase luxury products which were really unnecessary for us.

It was a disappointing trip I've never forgotten.

I won't go on a package holiday for ever again.

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* "seldom" is the adverb (seldomly is not a word) but it's very rarely used; it's very formal and almost archaic.

I'm sorry you had such a bad time!

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