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anyone check my writing please For the last past decades, Global warming is the most worrying problem that every countries were heavily concern about. This has impact to myriads issues including increasing the earth’s temperature, rising sea level, melting polar ice cap and unpredictable climate change. There is no way people can reverse the changes instead of adapt to extreme weather and mitigate the impact. In general, human activity is the most significant factor that worsens the green house effect. The largest known contribution comes from the burning of fossil fuels, which releases some toxic gasses such as carbon dioxide, and nitrous oxide. These gasses accumulating within the atmosphere and causing heat trap. Another cause arising from deforestation that resulting the escalating of carbon dioxide level in the air. This related to tree’s functioned to absorb CO2 from the air and releases oxygen as the result of photosynthesis. Finally, agriculture activity also contributes to this problem. For example, as the growth of agricultural sector in the world it can impact to the increasing of methane production in the atmosphere, which is one of powerful greenhouses gasses. However, personally I believe there are many ways to mitigate greenhouse effect. Firstly, every country have to commit to decrease their emission level. For instance, develop renewable energy sources such as solar power, biothermal, biomass energy and etc in order to replace the usage of fossil fuels. Secondly, government should preserve forest ecosystems and imposing a heavy penalty to illegal logging company. For the last but not least, as individuals we have to be smarter in the way of choosing environmental friendly product such as organic food, electricity-saving bulb, eco-friendly detergent, and using paper bag instead of plastic. In conclusion, global warming effect is non reversible but it can be extenuate as long as government and every people are serious to overcome the situation.

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