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Just a Monologue Since I didn't accomplish my homework on time,which is about a software called CAD.i must make a supplement of my homework.even though the interfaces of CAD were quite beautiful with mac version,i felt annoyed and anxious when using it.Perhaps reasons causing the result were I was tired and unfocused. I hope sober I could pay more attention in it and take pleasure .

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Just a Monologue

Since I didn't accomplish my homework on time, which was about a software called CAD I must make a supplement to my homework. Even though the interfaces of CAD were quite beautiful on the mac version I felt annoyed and anxious when using it. Perhaps the reason was that I was tired and unfocused. I hope when I'm sober I could pay more attention to it and take pleasure in it.

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Just a Monologue

Since I didn't accomplish my homework on time,which is about a software called CAD.i must make a supplement of my homework.even though the interfaces of CAD were quite beautiful with mac version,i felt annoyed and anxious when using it.Perhaps reasons causing the result were I was tired and unfocused. I hope sober I could pay more attention in it and take pleasure .


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I had to write a research paper about the computer software, Auto Cad, which I did not finish on time. I was given the option to do extra credit to make up for the failed grade. I have to admit that the reason why I didn't finish my homework was because when I tried to use the software, I felt annoyed by how difficult it was to use. Perhaps I was just tired and unfocused. In the future, I have to remind myself to pay more attention to deadlines and enjoy the feeling of learning new things. ) 



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