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안녕하세요! 한국 일지 #1 Starting today, I am going to be keeping a journal and write an entry every day. I will do my best (I'm sorry if I skip a day or two) to tell everyone about my day. I will make many mistakes in vocabulary, grammar, and sentence structure. I hope you all will have patience with me because although I've been studying for under a year, I still write and speak like I've only been studying for a month, haha. Thank you all. Entry #1: 안녕하세요. 제 이름은 마린입니다, 반갑습니다. 저는 한국어 공부하는데 왜냐하면 언어 정말 좋아해요. 한국어 공부를 재미있어요. 한국에서 와할게 좋겠어요. 감사합니다, 여러분! Translation: Hello. My name is Mylene, nice to meet you. I've been studying Korean because I really like the language. Studying (Korean) is fun. I wish to go to Korea (some day). Thank you, everyone. Please correct my mistakes. Thank you for your effort and support. Best Regards, Mylene Gibbs

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Entry #1: 

안녕하세요. 제 이름은 마린입니다, 반갑습니다.

저는 한국어 공부하는데 왜냐하면 언어를 정말 좋아하기 때문이에요. 

To make the meaning of this sentence clearer, you need clarify the object here by using "를" after  "언어". When you use "왜냐하면" in a sentence, it has to be finished with "때문이다." Here's an expression for you: "왜냐하면 ~하기/이기 때문이다. "

한국어 공부는 재미있어요.

한국어 공부 is a subject here, so you need to use "는" instead of "를". "를" is for an object.

언젠가 한국에서 가면 좋겠어요. 감사합니다, 여러분! 

Some day is "언젠가" in Korean.


Your sentences are great for a beginner! They are almost perfect as well :)) Keep working on it, Mylene!

글 정말 잘 쓰셨어요!! 계속 열심히 하세요^^ 

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