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The perplexed clerk
My wife bought many things from the grocery. She found that it was very heavy, so she asked a young clerk to help her take it to the car . When they arrived at the car, my wife sat on the back seat of the car then started to check the shopping list. The clerk was very confused and walked around the car and said to her, “ l‘m very happy to help you take the stuff into your car, but l can't help you drive home ."Very well written!
The confused clerk
My wife bought loads of stuff from the shop today. It was very heavy, so she asked one of the staff members to help her carry it all to her car. Naturally, he agreed. While he loaded the car, my wife sat in the back of the car to check her shopping list. She was so preoccupied with her list that she didn't notice that the shopping assistant had finished. Unsure what he had to do next, he said, "I'm happy to help you carry your shopping to the car but I don't think I'm allowed to drive you home..."
Fun story! I've lived in China for three years and I can almost see that happening. That assistant is a cheeky monkey. ;)
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The perplexed clerk
My wife bought many stuff from the grocery. She felt that they were too heavy for her to carry all of them.> " I'm happy to help you take these stuff to your car and put them in, but don't expect me to drive you home as well"
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