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Chia Yu
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes Morden technology development has made our lives faster than before, so nowadays people concern more about efficiency. As a result, people try to work higher speed but to risk making mistake. With the assistance of modern techniques, we work faster than before.For instance, people used to made cloth by their own,sewing day and night. In contrast ,cloth that we are wearing now, most of them are produce by machine in the factories,fast and large quantity.However there are luxury brands still use handmade clothing as their high price goods, because it's high quality and unique. Despite machine produce product quickly but because it's fast so it's hard to control their quality, in the end we will have to spent more time to fix or check it, yet, it might cost twice the time to find out mistake also will need more human resources working on the same project again. So if we spend longer time doing on our work but making sure that every procedure are correct.We won't need double check and can make the process work fluently, still we don't need to worry about if the mistake cause a disaster. All in all, I disagree with the statement that people should risk making mistake to work quickly. I think that making less mistake is more important than working fast.

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In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes

Modern technology development has made our lives faster than before, so nowadays people are more concerned about efficiency. As a result, people try to work at higher speed but risk making mistakes.

With the assistance of modern techniques, we work faster than ever before. For instance, people used to made clothes by hand, sewing day and night. In contrast, clothes that we are wearing now are mostly of produced by machine in factories, quickly and in large quantity. However, there are luxury brands that still have handmade clothing as their high price goods, because it's high quality and unique.

Although machines produce products quickly, because it's so fast it's hard to control their quality, and in the end we will have to spend more time to fix or check it. Additionally, it might take twice the time to find out about mistakes so will also will need more human resources working on the same project again.

So if we spend longer time doing our work but making sure that every procedure is correct, we won't need to double check and can make the process work fluidly, and thus we don't need to worry about if a mistake will cause a disaster.

All in all, I disagree with the statement that people should risk making mistakes to work more quickly. I think that making less mistakes is more important than working fast.

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