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Reach the summit of mountain It was my first time to reach the summit of Hehuan mountain. It’s 3417 meters high. The temperature was freezing cold even though the winter has not coming yet. I really enjoyed the accomplishment after overcoming my will and obstacle that I faced. I can still remember that I started to complain about giving up though it took only twenty minutes to arrive the goal. I was afraid what if I can’t find the way home just because night is coming at that time. Yes, I climbed the mountain with my best friend in the afternoon. (I know, it’s a bad idea.) Therefore, we reach the summit almost at dusk. However, honestly, I love the moment when I reach the top of Mt. Hehuan. After this crazy experience, I still want to thanks for my friend’s encouragement when I am tired of coping the fear that I faced. I think that I may try another crazy activities one day. Thank you for revising my article.

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Reaching the summit of a mountain

It was my first time to reach the summit of Hehuan Mountain. It’s 3417 meters high. The temperature was freezing cold even though the winter has not coming come yet. I really enjoyed the accomplishment after overcoming my will and obstacle that I faced. I can still remember that I started to complain about giving up though it took only twenty minutes to arrive at the goal. I was afraid of what if I can’t find the way home just because night is was coming at that time. Yes, I climbed the mountain with my best friend in the afternoon, even though I knew it was a bad idea. (I know, it’s a bad idea.) Therefore, we reached the summit almost at at almost dusk. However, I honestly loved the moment when I reached the top of Mt. Hehuan. After this crazy experience, I still want to thanks am still thankful for my friend’s encouragement when I am tired of coping with the fear that I faced. I think that I may try another crazy activities activity one day.

Thank you for revising my article.

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