A biography
My name´s Tania. I´m twenty eight years-old and I´m from Valladolid. I live here since I was a child. I´m single and I live with my mother in a flat. I have a brother who lives in a village near here with his girlfriend and Ziro, their dog.
I´m a teacher in a kindergardent which has 100 children. In my free time I enjoy play many sports, on monday and wendesday I go to the gym and at the weekend I play paddel or basketball with my friends.
I´m learning english because I´d like to work in other places and meet other cultures and in addition, I need it for my job. Everyday I speak a bit of english with my workmate but I need to improve my english because I often make a lot of mistakes.
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A biography
My name´s Tania. I´m twenty eight years-old and I´m from Valladolid. I have lived here since I was a child. I´m single and I live with my mother in a flat. I have a brother who lives in a village near here with his girlfriend and Ziro, their dog.I´m a teacher in a kindergarten which has 100 children. In my free time I enjoy playing many sports, and on Mondays and Wednesdays I go to the gym and at on the weekends I play paddle or basketball with my friends.
I´m learning English because I´d like to work in other places and meet people from other cultures and in addition, I need it for my job. Everyday I speak a bit of English with my workmate but I need to improve my English because I often make a lot of mistakes.
Good job Tania, and wishing you much success as you learn English!
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A biography
My name´s Tania. I´m twenty eight years-old, and I´m from Valladolid. I've lived live here since I was a child. I´m single, and I live with my mother in a flat. I have a brother who lives in a village near here [you could also say "a nearby village" or "a village nearby"] with his girlfriend and Ziro, their dog.I´m a teacher in a kindergardent which that has 100 children. In my free time I enjoy playing many sports. On Monday and wendWednesday I go to the gym, and at on the weekend I play paddel paddle ball or basketball with my friends.
I´m learning English because I´d like to work in other places and meet people from other cultures. in addition, I also need it English for my job. Every day I speak a bit of English with my workmate, [In U.S. English this is not a common word. We might say "colleague" or "co-worker/s".] but I need to improve my English, because I often make a lot of mistakes.
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* languages and days of the week are always capitalized.
* two independent clauses joined by a conjunction need a comma before the conjunction (see red highlighting)
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