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我住居的城市 （1） 我住在一坐叫做斯特拉斯堡(Strasbourg)的城市。這座城市的人口比中國的平均的城市太小，因為才有六十萬人。斯特拉斯堡位於法國的東北部。還是離德國的國境很近，才有五公里！騎自行車需要差不多十五分鐘。 The city I live in I live in a city called Strasbourg. This city's population is very small compared to an average chinese city, only 600 000 people. Strasbourg is located in the north-east of France. Also, it's very close to the german border, only 5 kilometers! By bicycle it only takes about 15 minutes to get there.

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我居住住居的城市 （1）

我住在一座坐叫做斯特拉斯堡(Strasbourg)的城市。這座城市的人口比中國的平均的城市更太小（最好改为人口规模，人口用小来形容不太恰当，或者直接说人口更少；另外“平均的城市”也不太恰当，可以说普通城市，或者说这座城市的人口规模比中国城市的平均人口规模更小，要准确表达very small也可以说“要小很多”），因為只才有六十萬人（or 因为才六十万）。斯特拉斯堡位於法國的東北部。另外，它還是離德國的國境（国界 or 边界is better）很近，只才有五公里！騎自行車需要差不多十五分鐘。

才 is only used when there is some premise

e.g.

只有努力才会有收获

 有目标才有动力

只有读过这本书才能理解当初他为什么要选择弃医从文

The city I live in

I live in a city called Strasbourg. This city's population is very small compared to an average chinese city, only 600 000 people. Strasbourg is located in the north-east of France. Also, it's very close to the german border, only 5 kilometers! By bicycle it only takes about 15 minutes to get there.

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紅色=不對

藍色=一般沒有這麼說，建議改一改



我住居 居住的城市 （1）

我住在一坐 座叫做斯特拉斯堡(Strasbourg)的城市。這座城市的人口比中國的平均的城市太小 與中國的平均城市人口少，因為才有六十萬人。斯特拉斯堡位於法國的東北部。還是 而且離德國的國境很近，才有五公里！騎自行車需要差不多十五分鐘。

The city I live in

I live in a city called Strasbourg. This city's population is very small compared to an average chinese city, only 600 000 people. Strasbourg is located in the north-east of France. Also, it's very close to the german border, only 5 kilometers! By bicycle it only takes about 15 minutes to get there.
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我住居的城市 （1）

我住在一坐叫做斯特拉斯堡(Strasbourg)的城市。这座城市的人口比一般中国城市的平均人口少，因為才有六十萬人。斯特拉斯堡位於法國的東北部。而且离德国的国境很近，才五公里！騎自行車需要差不多十五分鐘。

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謝謝您的評論。您說的是真的，多人告訴我『你一點看起來德國人』。
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我住居的城市 （1）

我住在一座叫做斯特拉斯堡(Strasbourg)的城市。這座城市的人口比中國一般的城市还小，因為才有六十萬人。斯特拉斯堡位於法國的東北部。離德國的國境很近，才有五公里！騎自行車需要差不多十五分鐘。

The city I live in

I live in a city called Strasbourg. This city's population is very small compared to an average chinese city, only 600 000 people. Strasbourg is located in the north-east of France. Also, it's very close to the german border, only 5 kilometers! By bicycle it only takes about 15 minutes to get there.

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