The disadvantage of private car
Firstly,it is obvious that private car is an essential transportation, more and more people can not live without their own car,they go to work,go travel,go shopping by their own car.However,we can not ignore that too much cars cause some social problems,for example,traffic jam,air pollution,traffic accident.Moreover due to the car emissions,the greenhouse fases release into the atmosphere,people are suffering the air pollution,just like haze.We can walk and cycling instead drive,not only because protect environment but also protect our healthy.
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The disadvantage of a private car
Firstly, it is obvious that a private car is an essential means of transportation. More and more people can not live without their own car. They go to work, go travel, and go shop by driving their own car. However, we can not ignore that too many cars cause some social problems. For example, traffic jams, air pollution, and traffic accidents. Moreover, due to the car emissions, the greenhouse gases release into the atmosphere, people are suffering from air pollution, just like a haze. We can walk and ride bikes instead of driving, not only because to protect the environment but also to protect our health.
Notes:
1) Always separate words that follow a comma:
Incorrect: "Traffic jams,air pollution,traffic accidents."
Correct: "Traffic jams, air pollution, traffic accidents."
2) Pay attention to plurals:
Incorrect: "Traffic jam, air pollution, traffic accident."
Correct: "Traffic jams, air pollution, traffic accident."
3) Be careful about overusing commas. Break up the sentences more.
Original: "Firstly, it is obvious that a private car is an essential means of transportation, more and more people can not live without their own car, they go to work, go travel, go shopping by their own car."
Better version: "Firstly, it is obvious that a private car is an essential means of transportation. More and more people cannot live without their own car. They go to work, travel, and shop driving their own car."
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The disadvantages of private personal cars
Firstly,it is obvious that a private personal car is an essential transportation, more and more people can not live without their own car,they go to work,go to travel,go to shopping by using their own car.However,we can not ignore that too much many cars cause some social problems,for example,traffic jam,air pollution,traffic accidents.Moreover due to the car emissions,the greenhouse fases gases release into the atmosphere, causing people are to suffering the air pollution, which is just like a haze.We can walk and bike cycling instead of drive driving ,not only because it protects the environment but also because it protects our healthy.Want to progress faster?
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