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Mountains saved me In 1998 we decided to go on holiday in the Carpathian Mountains. We rented a house in a small village, 30 km from the big city. Once I missed the last train that went to the village. I walked to the taxi driver and asked how much the trip cost. I had only half the required amount (necessary sum). Only one taxi driver agreed to bring me. When we passed the half-way, he stopped and said, "Since you had a little money, then this trip would be short." I began to beg him to bring me to the place. He agreed. After passing a little bit he stopped again, showed me the path through a small grove and said that I could come to my village. I did not go but ran because I was captured by fear. It was already 12.00 p.m. After 5 minutes I reached the village and realized that I did not live here. It was another village. I knocked at a house and asked for the night. People refused me. I did not know what to do. It was dark. I looked around. The moon was shining brightly. Looking at the mountains, I suddenly saw the familiar outlines of mountain peaks and walked toward them. I decided there was my home. I went by another path in the same forest. On the way I met two dogs running fast toward me. I stopped dead and waited for what would happen. But they ran past. When I passed through the woods I came to my village and saw the house where I was staying. Mountains saved me.

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Mountains saved me

In 1998, we decided to go on holiday to the Carpathian Mountains. We rented a house in a small village, 30 km from the big city. Once One day during our stay there, I missed the last train that went would take me back to the village. I walked to the a taxi driver and asked him how much the a trip to the village would cost. I had money for only half the amount required amount (necessary sum). Only one taxi driver agreed to bring me. take me back to the village for the money I had .
              
 When we passed the half-way point, he stopped the car and said: "Since you have a little money, then this trip would will be a short one then." I began to beg him to bring take me to the place. He agreed. After driving a little bit further, he stopped again, showed me the a path through a small grove and said that it would lead  I could come to my village. I did not just walk but ran all the way home, because I was captured by in fear-- it was already 12.00 p.m.!  After 5 minutes, I reached the village and realized that I did not live there. It was another village. I knocked at on a house and asked for accommodation for the night. They refused me. I did not know what to do.

It was dark. I looked around. The moon was shining brightly. Looking at the mountains, I suddenly/ immediately  saw the familiar outlines of some mountain peaks and walked toward them. I decided knew there was my home was over there. I took went by another path in the same forest. Along the way, I met saw two dogs running fast toward me. I stopped dead on my tracks and waited to see for what would happen to me. But they ran past me. When I had walked passed through the woods, I arrived at my village and saw the house where I was staying. The mountains had saved me.
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The Mountains saved me

In 1998 we decided to go on holiday in the Carpathian Mountains. We rented a house in a small village, 30 km from the big city. Once I missed the last train that went to the village. I walked to the taxi driver and asked how much the trip cost. I had only half the required amount (necessary sum). Only one taxi driver agreed to bring me.

When we passed the half-way point, he stopped and said, "Since you have a small amount of money, then this trip will be short." I began to beg him to bring me to the place. He agreed. After passing a little bit a bit more time passed he stopped again, he showed me the path through a small grove and said that I could come use that to go to my village. I did not only go but I ran because I was captured by fear. It was already 12.00 a.m. After 5 minutes I reached the village and realized that I did not live here. It was another village. I knocked at a house and asked to stay for the night. People refused me. I did not know what to do.

It was dark. I looked around. The moon was shining brightly. Looking at the mountains, I suddenly saw the familiar outlines of mountain peaks and walked toward them. I decided there was my home. I went by another path in the same forest. On the way I met two dogs running fast towards me. I stopped dead and waited for what would happen. But they ran past. When I passed through the woods I came to my village and saw the house where I was staying. The mountains saved me.

Good writing and nice story. 

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