Colombia peace deal.
I don´t know how to start talking about this topic, because it has divided to my country and it is a topic that I make sure, it makes many people angry . Therefore, I´m going to talk about my thought and opinion.
Two months ago, the Colombian government and the FARC (Revolutionary Armed Forces of Colombia) signed the peace deal; where there are many agreements that the most Colombian people disagree, such as economics and political decisions.
They think that the Farc leaders should go to jail instead of have any benefit since have killed and kidnapped many people.
On the other hand, I wonder; How would the Farc give up their airms if they know that are going to the jail?
I know that is very hard to forgive , and thank God, I´m not victim and I´ve not seen to die some friend or family, but I also think that everything will be all right and we need to forgive if we want that ours childrens and grand childrens enjoy a country in peace!
Thank you, I´m looking forward your corrections.
Sebastian Gutiérrez
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Colombia peace deal.
I don´t know how to start talking about this topic, because it has divided my country and it is a topic that I am sure makes many people angry . Therefore, I´m going to just talk about my thought and opinion.Two months ago, the Colombian government and the FARC (Revolutionary Armed Forces of Colombia) signed a peace deal in which there were many agreements that the most Colombian people disagree with, such as economics and political decisions.
They think that the FARC leaders should go to jail instead of have any benefits since they have killed and kidnapped many people.
On the other hand, I wonder: How would the FARC give up their airms if they know that are going to jail?
I know that is a very hard thing to forgive, and thank God, I´m not a victim, and I´ve not seen some friend or family member die. But I also think that everything will be all right and we need to forgive if we want our children and grandchildren to enjoy a country in peace!
Thank you for reading this, and I´m looking forward to your corrections.
Sebastian Gutiérrez
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Colombia's peace deal.
I don't know how to start talking about this topic, because it has divided to my country and it is a topic that I am sure that makes many people angry. Therefore, I'm going to talk about my thoughts and opinions.Two months ago, the Colombian government and the FARC (Revolutionary Armed Forces of Colombia) signed the peace deal, in which there are many agreements that the most Colombian people disagree on/about/over, such as economic and political decisions.
They think that the FARC leaders should go to jail instead of having any benefits since they have killed and kidnapped many people.
On the other hand, I wonder how would the FARC give up their armies if they knew that they were going to the jail.
I know that it is very hard to forgive, and thank God, I'm not a victim and I've not seen any friends or relatives die, but I also think that everything will be all right and we need to forgive if we want that our children and grandchildren to enjoy a country in peace!
Thank you, I'm looking forward to your corrections.
Sebastian Gutiérrez
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