Writing 7 - Replying to a friend
Dear Barbara,
I think it’s a great idea! I know you’ve always loved computer games and thus I’m sure you’ll really enjoy it… In fact, I’d like to join it too, but I don’t know if it’ll be possible. Can you tell me what the name’s club is? Have you had to pay some fee? Actually I don’t have much money…
On the other hand, I’d like to know the timetable of the club because on Tuesday and Thursday morning I’ve my drawing lessons. In addition, on Saturday I go to mountain to walk… To tell the truth, I don’t have too free time to new activities!
Bests,
María.
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Writing 7 - Replying to a friend
Dear Barbara,I think it’s a great idea! I know you’ve always loved computer games and therefore I’m sure you’ll really enjoy it… In fact, I’d like to join it too, but I don’t know if its possible. Can you tell me what the club's name is? Did you have to pay a fee? Actually I don’t have much money…
On the other hand, I’d like to know the timetable of the club because on Tuesday and Thursday mornings I’ve got my drawing lessons. In addition, on Saturdays I go walking in the mountains… To tell the truth, I don’t have much free time for new activities!
Best wishes,
María.
'thus' isn't used very much in general english any more.
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