An informal letter
Hello Sara!
How are you doing? Do you remember the last time we saw each other?
Well , the following day I went to the Institute with a smooth t-shirt and a small jacket because the weather was warm.
The class finished and I was on my way to the bus station when suddenly it started to rain, I didn't had my umbrella so I ran quickly but I was soaked. When I arrived home I felt like I was about to come down with a flu, also I got a sore throat that`s why I decided to go to the doctor. He told me it was because of the weather change. I took an aspirin to relieve my headache and some tea with honey. Fortunately, now I'm over it.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Daniela.
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An informal letter
Hello Sara!
How are you doing? Do you remember the last time we saw each other?
Well , the following day I went to the Institute with a smooth (smooth? do you mean small? thin? loose?) t-shirt and a small jacket because the weather was warm. The class finished, and I was on my way to the bus station when suddenly it started to rain. I didn't had have my umbrella, so I ran quickly, but I was soaked. When I arrived home, I felt like I was about to come down with a flu. also I also got a sore throat, which is that`s why I decided to go to the doctor. He told me it was because of the change in weather weather change. I took an aspirin to relieve my headache and some tea with honey. Fortunately, now I'm over it I'm better now.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. (or: I look forward to hearing from you soon)
All the best,
Daniela
Really good overall! I added some commas to give it a more natural tone (with pausing). I recommend the children's book "Eats Shoots and Leaves" to help understand how punctuation is important in the english language. :)
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An informal letter
Hello Sara!How are you doing? Do you remember the last time we saw each other?
Well, the following day I went to the Institute with a smooth simple or thin t-shirt and a small jacket because the weather was warm.
The class finished and I was on my way to the bus station when suddenly it started to rain, I didn't had have my umbrella so I ran quickly but I was soaked. When I arrived home I felt like I was about to come down with a flu, and also I got a sore throat that`s why I decided to go to the doctor. He told me it was because of the weather change. I took an aspirin to relieve my headache and some tea with honey. Fortunately, now I'm over it.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Daniela.
Very good writing Daniela and good use of some common phrasal verbs, which I made bold. If you have questions about my correction, .let me know. - Jason
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An informal letter
Hello Sara!How are you doing? Do you remember the last time we saw each other?
Well, the following day I went to the Institute with a smooth t-shirt and a small jacket because the weather was warm.
The class finished and I was on my way to the bus station when suddenly it started to rain. I didn't have my umbrella so I ran quickly but I was soaked. When I arrived home I felt like I was about to come down with the flu, and I also got a sore throat. That's why I decided to go to the doctor. He told me it was because of the weather change. I took an aspirin to relieve my headache and drank some tea with honey. Fortunately, now I'm over it.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Daniela.
Very good!
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