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If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Truly, all countries around the world even developed ones have minor and trivial issues, and both government and people are fully aware them. However, majority claim that those issues are scarcely happened as well as are not considerably deserved to pinpoint and to be taken into serious actions. I completely opposed their views, if I could have a chance to change one of them, I would change driving habit. Seriously, people are totally crazy and bizarre when they are driving and it obviously makes us so distracted, nervous and anxious from dawn to twilight. This is very major issue and i don't consider it as trivial, and mainly I feel this way for two reasons and from different perspectives, below paragraphs will reveal them. First and foremost, human populations' statistic shows that they are incredibly increasing at a high pace. It obviously causes many traffic jams and congestion. Clearly, driving is the same as other routine habit and without saying; it became an important and inevitable part of our life. Because of that, lack of restrictions and robust rules to controls traffic and people behavior while they are driving, it will end up more chaotic and even accidents. For example, Riyadh city is saturated with 8 billion populations so far and every day there is congestion and accidents in many high ways. This primarily because the absence of rigid traffic regulations and with increasingly thoughtless drivers who are making driving much harder to people. Moreover, in every society there are high percentage of people who are hardly trying to cope with their life circumstances; some of them try to handle their financial issues such as insecure jobs and health care etcetera, and others, who have a family and personal issues. Hence, they are exposed and confronting with reckless people in the road which will eventually worsen and deteriorate their psychology status quo, instead of getting something that will relieve some of the burden and weaknesses they are confronting with. For instance, high percentage of major crimes evidently happened on the road, and people who are suffering financially or mentally are most likely prone to be ignited from crazy drivers. Essentially, we relentlessly encounter bad driving habit on regular basis, therefore, we strongly need to raise awareness on the national scale and put harsh regulations and roles to sooth and make driving easier for people. Otherwise, the unfavorable and even harmful consequences will occur.

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Moreover, in every society there are high percentages of people who are barely coping with their life circumstances; some of them are struggling with financial issues such as insecure jobs and healthcare etcetera, and others who have a family and personal issues. Hence, they are exposed to confronting with reckless people on the road which will eventually aggravate their psychological status quo, instead of getting something that will relieve some of the burden and weaknesses they are confronting with. For instance, a high percentage of major crimes evidently happens on the road, and people who are suffering financially or mentally are most likely prone to be inflamed by crazy drivers. 


Essentially, we relentlessly encounter bad driving habits on a regular basis, therefore, we urgently need to raise awareness on a national scale and put harsh regulations and rules to soothe and make driving easier for people. Otherwise, the unfavorable and even harmful consequences will occur.
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If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change?

Truly, all countries around the world, even developed ones, have minor and trivial issues, and both government and people are fully aware of them. However, the majority claim that these issues are scarcely happened as well as are not considerably deserved to pinpoint are a rare occurrence and not worth any serious attention and to be taken into serious actions. I am completely opposed to these viewpoints and if I had the  chance to change any of them, I would change driving habits. Seriously, people are totally crazy and bizarre when they are driving and it obviously makes us so distracted, nervous and anxious from dawn till dusk. This is very significant issue and i don't consider it as trivial, and mainly I feel this way for two reasons and from different perspectives, the following below paragraphs will reveal them.

First and foremost, human populations' statistics shows that they are increasing at an incredibly high rate. It obviously causes many traffic jams and congestion. Clearly, driving is the same as other routine habits and it goes without saying that it has become an important and inevitable part of our life. Because of that, a lack of restrictions and robust rules to control traffic and driver behavior while they are driving, it will result in more chaos and even accidents. For example, Riyadh city is saturated with a population of 8 million so far and every day there is congestion and accidents in many highways. This is primarily because of the absence of rigid traffic regulations and with increasingly thoughtless drivers who are making driving that much harder to people.


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