Please correct^^ tommy's easy
As soon as, a parents who have been separated, joining a conference about declining schoolwork and disruptive behavior of your son, Tommy. Both of them don't know they are invited in the same time. Tommy, their only child, he was happy, obedient and a excellent pupil before. But now, I don't know how to tell them that his declining results are child's reaction who bring a big wound about his parents's separation and divorce. Tommy's mother comes in and sits down the chair I had placed near my desk. Tommy's father comes then. They mean to ignore together
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Please correct^^ tommy's easy (I'm not sure what you mean by the title? Maybe 'Tommy's Reaction' would work?)
The recently separated parents, went to a meeting about the declining schoolwork and disruptive behaviour of their son, Tommy. Neither of them knew they had been invited at the same time. Tommy, their only child, had been happy, obedient and an excellent pupil before; but now, I didn't know how to tell them that his declining results were a child's reaction to extreme pain about his parents's separation and divorce. Tommy's mother came in and sat down on the chair I had placed near my desk. Tommy's father then came in. They ignored one anotherTo be continued......
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Please correct^^ Tommy's Essay
As soon as, a The parents who have been separated, joining were invited to a conference(meeting) about the declining schoolwork and disruptive behavior of your their son, Tommy. Both of them didn't know that they were invited in at the same time. Tommy, their only child, he was a happy, obedient, and an excellent pupil before. But then, I didn't know how to tell them that his declining results was his reaction who bring a big wound to his their separation and divorce and now he has a wound in his heart. Tommy's mother came in and sat down on the chair that I had placed near my desk. Tommy's father then came in. They all ignored one another.
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"Tommy" the victim of parental separation
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