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kanae's notebook entry: Apr 11, 2011 Today also M 7.1 and 5.9' aftershock came to pacific ocean side. Some people think about their future. Because they should leave their home town. Because of nuclear power plant. In your country, does gorvament help nation? and how?

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kanae's notebook entry: Apr 11, 2011

Today also an M 7.1 and 5.9' aftershock came to the pacific ocean side [of Japan]. It makes some people think about their future, Because whether they should leave their home town because of nuclear power plant. In your country, does the gorvernment help their nation? and how?

Hi Kanae-san, Try and join short sentences together and avoid starting sentences with "because" where you can. It's considered "bad form" :)

"Because", is used to join related sentences together.
Ex. "I need to go and eat" because "I am hungry".

Cheers,
Andoru

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