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The previous correction is good, but I will give you an alternate version. :-)
Dreams
The blind dream. People who become blind after birth can see images in their dreams. Those who are born blind cannot see images but have dreams that involve other senses.Absolutely everyone dreams. Only in extreme cases do people not dream. And if you think you do not dream, you are probably just forgetting them.
Dreams
Blind people dream. The people become blind after of birth can see images in their dreams. If the people born blind can't see images but have dreams that involve other senses.People who are blind dream. People who become blind after birth can see images in their dreams. If they are born blind, they can't see images but have dreams that involve other senses.
Absolutely everyone dreams. Only there is extreme cases where people don't dream. But if you think you don't dreams, you are just forgetting them .
Absolutely everyone dreams. There are only very extreme cases where people don't dream. But if you think you don't dream, you probably just forget your dreams.
Very good! The first correction I made (people who are blind vs. blind people) is not a grammatical correction. Where I live (and I'm sure other places!), people are very careful not to define people by their disabilities. It is more polite to say "people who are xxx" rather than "xxx people." There's a little cultural lesson for you! You write very well, and that was also very interesting! :)
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