Bucket List
I'm not gonna kick my bucket any time soon but making a wish list is something fun to do. So I will start writing some.
1. Travel around the world.
Sounds cheesy ? I don' t care. I will do what I want to do. That is the list for.
2. Play the music with my old school friends
I played rock music with my friends when we were in high school. After the graduation, we've walked separate lives and rarely seen each other. So someday I want to make the band reunion just for one day.
3. Study at college
I haven't gone to college YET!!! There is nothing wrong following my intellectual interest all through my life.
I don't need any accolade by going to school. Just saturate a thirst of knowledge.
That's it for now and list will go on as time passes by.
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a. the phrase in English is "kick the bucket" - never "my bucket" or "your bucket".
b. reunite is the verb form of reunion
c. a gig is a concert or small job
All other corrections are just to make it sound more natural - but your writing sounds very natural and informal. Great job!
In the case of articles, it's really quite simple.
we use a / an for objects that are one in a group.
LLLLL L<--- "an L"
OOO O<---- "an O"
we use the for objects that we know already
the Sun, the Moon, the Earth.
the pen in your hand (we know which pen)
the car I drive (we know which car)
the cars you own
the planets in our solar system
and we leave out that word if there is more than one, or if it's a name.
Budapest, Istanbul, Tokyo, pens, pencils, cars
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Bucket List
I'm not gonna kick the bucket any time soon but making a bucket list is something fun to do. So I will start writing some.1. Travel around the world.
Sounds cheesy ? I don't care. I will do what I want to do. That is what this list is for.
2. Play the music with my old school friends
I played rock music with my friends when we were in high school. After the graduation, we've walked separate lives and have rarely seen each other. So someday I want to reunite the band reunion just for one more gig.
3. Study at college
I haven't gone to college (YET!!!) There is nothing wrong with following my intellectual interests all through my life.
I don't mean to go to school for an accolade, just to saturate my thirst for knowledge.
That's it for now! This list will go on as time goes by.
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Bucket List
I'm not gonna kick my the bucket any time soon but making a wish list is something fun to do. So I will start writing some one.1. Travel around the world.
Sounds cheesy ? I don' t care. I will do what I want to do. That is what the list is for.
2. Play the music with my old school friends
I played rock music with my friends when we were in high school. After the graduation, we've walked separate lives and rarely seen each other. So someday I want to make the have a band reunion just for one day.
3. Study at college
I haven't gone to college YET!!! There is nothing wrong with following my intellectual interests all through my life.
I don't need any accolades from by going to school. Just to saturate a my thirst of for knowledge.
That's it for now and I'll add to this list will go on as time passes by.*
*As a native English speaker I would probably phrase this as "I'll add to this list as time goes on."
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