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Please correct my sentences. I sometimes spend the lunch time in Starbucks because I can use WiFi during staying in it. The WiFi is essential for me so that I study English like hearing podcast, reading articles etc. I can also use the internet via LTE, but it is so slow during the lunch time because users increase rapidly in that time.

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Please correct my sentences.

Sometimes I spend lunch in Starbucks because I can use the WiFi. The WiFi is essential for me to study English so that I can listen to podcasts, read articles,etc. I can also use the internet via LTE, but it is so slow during lunch time because users increase rapidly in that time. "(I would say, " I also use LTE, but users tend to rapidly increase which tends to make it slow during lunch." or "I also use LTE during lunch, however, it is usually slow because a high volume of people use it during that time.")


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Please correct my sentences.

I sometimes spend my lunch time in Starbucks because I can use the WiFi  there. The WiFi is essential for me so that I can study English by listening to podcast, reading articles etc. I can also use the internet via LTE, but it is so slow during the lunch time because users increase rapidly in that time./ because there are many people using it (at the same time).


listening to something: you pay attention to what you hear
hear something: you hear the sound, does not necessarily mean you are paying attention 

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