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The society is extremely aging in Japan. Yesterday I had an intensive course about the aging society in Japan.The importance of nursing care profession is more and more rising, but there are not enough people who can care for old people.This is a serious problem. I worked a part time job of that, and that was too hard .Some old people are arrogant ,but I can't complain about that. It can't be helped.

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Japan's aging society

Yesterday, I had an intensive, and very informative course about Japan's aging society. The importance of, and need for, individuals to enter the nursing care profession is growing more and more larger, but it seems there are not enough people interested in that field. This is a very serious problem.
I, myself, worked just a part time job, but even that was too hard! Some old people are arrogant, but I really can't complain about that. Anyway, it can't be helped.


Good job! I was able to easily understand the ideas that you wanted to convey. I agree with you, this is a serious problem in most developed countries. As to the English, perhaps reading English language newspapers and magazines, even on-line, will help you to improve your vocabulary and sentence structure. In turn, that will allow you to compose better sentences and paragraphs. I hope this helps you. J.

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In Poland, in Europe and each country which good prospers is te same problame. People who are young don`t want care old people. My grondmother is in hospice, she is 95 years old. I try visit her when i can. I see how staff work there. Old people who spend there last moments they should have good care but it don`t work that. Naturally we are only human and we can have to bad, worst moments but ouer bad behavior we should stay out of. I saw a staff who shouted, jerked old people. A staff should better sellected.

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