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My Bestfriend Hello. I have bestfriend in my life and she is like my sister when we are together. We close together since year 2013 and until now. Her name is Bella Natasha. We live at different state in Malaysia but we are all studied at the same place and but different course. My best friend is someone special whom I can share my all feelings. We know each other very well as well as understand each other’s need. She is leadership in nature, tall, brown skin and smart. She is very good in studies and behaves well with everyone. She does her class work and homework very attentively. She is favourite student of class teacher as she is very punctual and follows all the etiquettes. Eventhough sometimes she was quit annoying. For the first time I knew her, we didn't talk to each other but when we are introduce ourself eventually we become closer. We share our favorite place during lunch time at food court Shah Alam. She respects my feelings and helps me always. Many things of us like hobbies, favorite place, etc are similar. We love to listen music, watching romantic movies and gossiping all the time. We take care of each other in the school eventhough during we hanging out. We share school copies and help each other whenever one of us remain absent in the school. She love in coding website and I love arts in our spare time. We go at tour and holiday together in every semester break and after exam. She also always be there for me when I really need for help such as money problem. During my birthday in every year, she never missed to give a present and bring me to special place for special dinner. To her, money is nothing for her than our friendships. Good friends are really nice. They're there to support you and to help you when we are really need help. They make you laugh and feel good. I'm lucky, I have her as my very good friends. Sure, I have lots of other friends. But these person, I would take a bullet for.

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Good friends are really nice. They're there to support you and to help you whenever we you are really need help. They make you laugh and feel good. I'm lucky, I have to have her as my best friend. very good friends. Sure, I have lots of other friends. But this person is the only one I would take a bullet for.

Comment: Very good attempt but many of the sentence are repetitive (e.g.: there are two separate sentence for hobbies that can be combined to one). Try not to repeat the same thing over and over again in the passage. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes, it would help a lot if you can improve your grammar. By the way, this is suppose to be in the English section, no?

Glad to see you have such a good friend. Keep up the good work. Terus berusaha dan semoga berjaya.

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When I first met For the first time I knew her, we didn't talk to each other but when after we got to know each other are introduce ourself eventually we became closer eventually. (You should talk about how both of you started talking). We shared our favorite place during lunch time at food court Shah Alam (This doesn't really makes sense, I guess you are saying "We had our own special spot in the Shah Alam food court" or "We shared a table in the Shah Alam food court" ?) . She respects my feelings and helps me always. We shared many of our favorite Many things of us like hobbies, favorite place, etc. are similar. 

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I have a best friend in my life and she is like a my sister to me when we are together. We are close together and have been friends since year 2013 and until now. Her name is Bella Natasha. We live in at different states in Malaysia. but Both of us we are all studied at the same place (university/college would be better instead of "place") and but different courses. My best friend is someone special whom I can share my all feelings with.

We know each other very well and as well as understand each other’s needs. She is smart, tall, brown-skinned, and a natural leader leadership in nature, brown skin. She is very good in studies and behaves well with everyone. She does her class work and homework very attentively. She is the favourite student of our class teacher as she is very punctual and follows all the etiquettes, even though sometimes she was quite annoying.


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Hi @zarrin ! Nice to know you! I want to learn english very well:)
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Nice to meet you. What language you eager to learn?

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