I just miss...

There are so many differences between America and Japan. I've lived in America for over a year, and am finally gettting used to American life, so I really enjoy it better now. However, I often feel like something is missing? Can you imagine what it is? Since there is no bathtub in my apartment,  I can't take a bath! Most Japanese people take a bath every day, and I, myself, also used to do so while living in Japan to recover from the tiredness of the day. So now, here in America, I can no longer take a long, refreshing, relaxing, toe-wrinkling, satisfying soak in a tub of hot water. Sadly, I think I'll only be able to enjoy taking a bath whenever I go back to Japan on a business trip.

Good job! Nice use of a personal experience as the topic of your writing. I definitely feel your pain wherever I visit my relatives in Thailand as none of their houses have bathtubs either. As to the English, learning more vocabulary, especially adjectives, will allow you to compose more descriptive sentences. Perhaps more reading, a good newspaper or magazine, will give you a better "feel" as to sentence construction. I hope this helps! J.

I just miss...

There are many differences between America and Japan. I've been lived in America for over a year, and am getting used to American life, so I really enjoy it. However, I'm actually feeling like something is lacking. Do you imagine what it is? So, I can't take a bath because of no deep bath tub in my apartment. Most Japanese people take a bath every day, and I also used to do it in Japan to recover from tiredness of the day. I think I'll enjoy taking a bath only when I go on a business trip to Japan.

Very good!  My house is almost 100 years old and has only a bath tub.  I miss quick showers :)