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kaki's notebook entry: Apr 06, 2011 I had a dance in university circles.I want to be better.

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kaki's notebook entry: Apr 06, 2011

I had a dance in at my university circles club. I want to be get better.

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No big mistakes! I've highlighted some possible improvements.
Using the word "circle" to mean a group or club is not common.
 

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