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Ireally really feel unhappy today. I wanna change my job,because I cann't find the passion like I used to do,and the stuffs are very very hard to communicate with.I think that maybe change a environment can make my life better.without pressure of dealing relationship well with customers,without my boss's yelling.I really really need a break,right now.
however,there is no chance for me to have a rest.should I give it up and start a new career?
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I really, really feel unhappy today. I want change my job, because Ihowever, there is no chance for me to have a rest. Should I give
Good job, I know you are repeating words to emphasis your point, so I didn't mark them out. We do that in English a lot. Also, "give up" is a phrase used a good deal. Also, other phrases to use to show exasperation about something: "I want to just give up!", "throw up my hands" or "throw in the towel".
Another way to phrase your second sentence where it would read better would be:
I want to change my job, because I don't feel the passion like I once did, and communication is hard.
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it is good
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